Who is I am?
Posted on Apr 8th, 2008
by
indianking
Research of life its seems hard to remember all things all moment u had passed had enjoyed and even you felt sorrow on that moments. No one bound times it’s going in with similar speed (constant). Just if we try to keep our all (happiest and sorrow) moments and save those all for future memory if u do this process regularly. Who is I m? Dear friend first please try to find answer of this question I hope i ll get more Answer here so write Ur answer
"Something of God...flows into us from the blue of the
sky, the taste of honey, the delicious embrace of water
Whether cold or hot, & even from sleep itself." C.S. Lewis
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Amit, you have so much potential as a writer! I can tell that you have so much to say and that in English it's a pain to write what you are feeling!
Did you mean to title this piece, “Who Am I?” The word 'is' seems out of place. I felt that you are saying that to remember a feeling, be it sorrow, or enjoyment , is difficult but that it is possible to save the feeling for a moment in the future when it is needed. Was this a correct interpretation?
“While researching life it seems hard to remember all feelings, every moment you have enjoyed or even when feeling sorrow. If we try to keep our happiest and saddest moments we can save those for future memory if we do this process regularly. Who am I? Dear Friend, first try to find the answer to this question.”
Amit, my answer to your question “Who am I?” is this. I am a single cell in the human entity on this planet. I am one of a whole, including you and your family! All people on this planet are one living, breathing organism. My purpose is to help my fellow cells in this organism called Humanity to be the best that we can be. I loved your blog and am glad that you shared it with us!
Please keep writing your thoughts! English has a funny way of dropping most of the words other languages use and it also adds silent vowels for no apparent reason! I always hit spell check and make sure that the word that I use too many times in one paragraph, that has been deleted! ~grin~ This sentence reads better when you take the word that out of, “I always hit spell check and make sure the word I use too many time in one paragraph, that has been deleted!” Do you see where it's easy to add too many words to a sentence! I do it all the time. I also like to use the words and, but, which turns a sentence into what we call a 'run on' sentence! If you feel the need to add either and or but see if you can put a period in their place and start a new sentence!
You didn't make either of these mistakes that I make every time I write! I wanted to show you that I make them and how I correct them! Writing takes many hour of practice. I think that writing blogs are the best way to learn because it's an informal way of writing, your thoughts are written down where you can go back and see how you were feeling at the time, and all of us get to enjoy you and what is going on in your life!
Keep the blogs coming!
Smiles!
amber
Yeah i gotta ponder that question Amit:D thanks for the stuff to think about!!!